A STORY TOLD IN SONG: 3

4.7
(25)

HELLO

AUTHOR’S NOTE

Here’s the final 750-word piece instal of Phillip and Annabelle’s story. Like the previous instalments its based on a song. Looking for songs that inspired me has proved to me that there truly is a song for every occasion!

Chapter One was based on ‘Woman Have You Got Cheating On Your Mind?’ By Gary Puckett and the Union Gap.

Chapter Two used for its inspiration ‘I’m Not The Only One’ by Sam Smith.

This chapter, Chapter Three, looks to ‘Hello’ by Adele to inform the telling of Phillip and Annabelle’s epilogue.

Please take the time to listen to the songs, they’re all wonderful songs.

I’ve enjoyed the challenge of limiting myself to 750-words per instal. I hope you have as well.

Vandy, my love, thank you sending me a kind and generous email back in early 2017. In a few short days we will celebrate four years together and I wouldn’t change a single minute of those years. I love you more each day.

Oh, and thanks for the proofread!

Happy Reading.

###

Hello, it’s me
I was wondering if after all these years you’d like to meet
To go over everything
They say that time’s supposed to heal ya
But I ain’t done much healing

Annabelle gripped the edge of the basin, doubling over. Her head hit the mirror.

She closed her eyes, allowing her forehead to rest against the coolness of the mirror. She couldn’t face her tortured reflection. No matter how many times she heard this song she reacted the same way; like she’d been punched in the gut.

Hello, can you hear me?
I’m in California dreaming about who we used to be
When we were younger and free
I’ve forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet

There’s such a difference between us
And a million miles

She wanted to switch off the radio, end the song, but compulsion dictated she emotionally self-flagellate to the song.

Hello from the other side
I must’ve called a thousand times
To tell you I’m sorry for everything that I’ve done
But when I call, you never seem to be home

How many times had she phoned Phillip to explain? To apologise. To beg. And, yes, to tell him she forgave him for the revenge he wreaked on her and Rick. She’d lost count.

And Phillip’s revenge had been terrible. She’d been forced to move across the country to start over because he’d destroyed her life so thoroughly. Publicly shamed. Loss of friends. She’d had to resign from her job because Melissa worked there too.

She didn’t blame Phillip – from great pain came great anger. And she’d hurt him greatly.

Hello from the outside
At least I can say that I’ve tried
To tell you I’m sorry for breaking your heart
But it don’t matter, it clearly doesn’t tear you apart anymore

No truer words. Phillip didn’t care anymore. He’d moved on. Not surprising; it had been five years. Her mother had sent her the newspaper clipping of the wedding.

Hello, how are you?
It’s so typical of me to talk about myself, I’m sorry
I hope that you’re well
Did you ever make it out of that town where nothing ever happened?

It’s no secret that the both of us are running out of time

Well, for her it was. She was thirty-six now, her biological clock ticking. It might as well be a bomb. No new love. No new man. No one compared to Phillip. Even the annoying things she now remembered with fondness.

So hello from the other side (Other side)
I must’ve called a thousand times (Thousand times)
To tell you I’m sorry for everything that I’ve done
But when I call, you never seem to be home

The song mirrored her life. How many times had she called? How many messages had she left? How many times had she laid her heart bare? Thousands.

Hello from the outside (Outside)
At least I can say that I’ve tried (I’ve tried)
To tell you I’m sorry for breaking your heart
But it don’t matter, it clearly doesn’t tear you apart anymore

Had Phillip found closure? She hoped so. He deserved it. She hoped Phillip’s total destruction of Rick – financial, emotional, physical – hadn’t permanently scarred his soul.

Annabelle shuddered at the memory of Rick. Compared to him, Phillip had shown her mercy.

Gone was the confident flirt. Replaced by a mere husk of a man. A shadow. His nose no longer as straight as it once was. Rumour had it the same could be said of his dick.

Raped in the divorce. All he had left was a job; a lonely bedfellow.

Ooh-ooh, anymore
Ooh-ooh-ooh, anymore
Ooh-ooh, anymore
Anymore

Hello from the other side (Other side)
I must’ve called a thousand times (Thousand times)
To tell you I’m sorry for everything that I’ve done
But when I call, you never seem to be home

The rasp in Adele’s voice matched the rasp on Annabelle’s emotions the lyrics evoked. Torture. Punishment.

Hello from the outside (Outside)
At least I can say that I’ve tried (I’ve tried)
To tell you I’m sorry for breaking your heart
But it don’t matter, it clearly doesn’t tear you apart anymore

The final notes faded. Annabelle lifted her gaze and faced her reflection. Her face was a ruin. Her mascara had run looking like ink stains on her cheeks.

She reached for the make-up remover. She’d have to wash and start again.

A bit like her life. The parallel wasn’t lost on Annabelle.

THE END

HERE’S A JOKE TO EASE YOU BACK TO REALITY!

Last Sunday morning CreativityTakesCourage was making a breakfast of fried eggs for Vandemonium1.

Suddenly, Van1 burst into the kitchen.

“Careful,” he said, “CAREFUL! Put in some more butter! Oh my gosh! You’re cooking too many at once. TOO MANY! Turn them! TURN THEM NOW! We need more butter. Oh my gosh! WHERE are we going to get MORE BUTTER? They’re going to STICK! Careful. CAREFUL! I said be CAREFUL! You NEVER listen to me when you’re cooking! Never! Turn them! Hurry up! Are you CRAZY? Have you LOST your mind? Don’t forget to salt them. You know you always forget to salt them. Use the salt. USE THE SALT! THE SALT!”

CTC stared at him. “What the hell is wrong with you? You think I don’t know how to fry a couple of eggs?”

Van1 calmly replied, “I just wanted to show you what it feels like when I’m driving.”

HAVE YOUR SAY. RATE US!

YOUR THUMBS, GOOD OR BAD, HELP US IMPROVE OUR WRITING!

Average Rating: 4.7 / 5. Vote count: 25

NO VOTES SO FAR! BE THE FIRST TO RATE THIS STORY

We welcome constructive criticism

Your feedback would be appreciated

Tell us how you think this story could be improved

10 Replies to “A STORY TOLD IN SONG: 3”

  1. Van, excellent integration of song with story. I came across this story before on Lit. I was trying to think of a song and story, but never quite found the right one.I already have enough trouble writing a story, I won’t even consider writing lyrics to a song

    1. Um, sorry to disappoint you, Howard, but Vandemonium1 didn’t write the A Story Told In Song series, I did – CreativityTakesCourage.
      I hope that fact doesn’t detract from your enjoyment of the series.
      Thanks for taking the time to comment.
      CTC

  2. Hey CTC,
    A little off topic but are you having any trouble seeing the comments on the stories on Literotica? I’ve commented on all three stories but when I try to look at the comments section it either never loads the comments or shows 0 comments. My personal page shows that I’ve commented on them but I still can’t see any comments. It’s not just your stories but everyone’s. Tried contacting Lit but I might as well tried contacting the man in the moon. Trying to figure out if it’s something on my side or whether it’s a Literotica problem. Thanks.

  3. You’ve come up with a new way to tell your great stories. This ended just the way I hoped it would. Annabelle lost and alone, and Rick destroyed. Great work, and maybe you can get Vande off his ass, or arse, to do a little writing. Maybe you could even do another great collaboration for us. Thank you for all of it. SG

Leave a Comment